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Monday, March 24, 2008

Passage Explication of the Inde book,

Sailing to Capri Passage Explication

In Sailing to Capri, Elizabeth Adler creates spontaneous characters by using imagery in order to convey the purpose of the novel. Towards the end of the book, Harry Montana reads the individual letters that Bob had written to all the suspects and Daisy Keane describe in a passage about the consequences of all the suspects. Elizabeth Adler suggests that no matter how hard people try to escape from the crime they’ve commit in the end they’ll get caught. But for those who commit no crime will be safe from all harm.

Elizabeth Adler creates a witty, intelligent, and sophisticated character in Robert Hardwick, by convincing the murderer to tell the truth through his will. He basically describe his love for them and gives them a second chance in life by offering them money and a new home. After hearing the will, Roberts ex-lover, Rosalia admits that she killed him because her friend Hector had tricked her into calling Robert by saying it was him. And once Rosalia called the number she had activated explosive device in Robert’s car that Hector had affixed. In this passage when the truth has been told, Adler uses the imagery to convey the meaning of the novel. After, Hector “made a run for the door but the guards moved to block him…and headed for the French doors with the guards after him” (343). As Hector ran Daisy snagged him because she was outraged that he killed Robert for money. So Hector decides to hold her hostage. “He swung around, got her neck in a headlock and held her in front of him” (343). In a few seconds later a storm burst open the French doors and Hector dragged Daisy “out to the edged onto the terrace”(344). Daisy has always been a good person, she never commit a crime and only helped people. She was a good friend and kind assistant to Bob. So at that crucial moment, she begged silently to Robert, “Help me, Bob. Please help me” (344). And out of nowhere a mini- tornado came, “circling and swirling, shafting between them like a sword. Hector was knocked to the ground.”(344). Montana grabbed Daisy away from her threat and Hector made his way toward the blue door that led from the garden and onto the cliff. Montana stopped everyone who tried to go after him. He said that there is no where for him to run because this is an island and the storm is hitting hard and the police are waiting for him. Everyone stayed inside and Daisy wept her eyes out but no major harm was put on her physically except for the bruise around her neck. In the end Hector was surrounded by the police on the cliff. Hector “made a run for it, it was dark and wet, he didn’t know the terrain. A fissure runs deep into the cliffs there; obviously he didn’t see it….found his body on the rocks below” (355).

Therefore Elizabeth Adler suggestion that no matter how hard people try to escape from the crime they’ve commit in the end they’ll get caught is true. Hector eventually died as a penalty for taking someone else life. And Daisy is safe and happy because she hadn’t committed any crime.

Plum Plum Pickers Explication


Plum Plum Pickers Explication

What it means to be human

The Plum Plum Pickers is about workers who are trapped in low-paying, dead-end job, where they have to pick plums off of trees for a living. They unhappily do there job until the afternoon. So Raymond Barrio suggests that humans are not meant to live life mechanically or insensibly but to experience it with honor and pride through his literary styles.

In the first paragraph a worker is picking plum on a hot day, he is tired and exhausted. Barrio uses a one word sentence to describe and emphasize the state of being that the worker is in. He carefully chooses words such as “Brute… Beast... Savage… Wreck” (40) describing him in an animal-like sense. Barrio uses repetition to describes the workers surrounding as being “trapped in an endless maze of apricot trees as though forever, neat rows of them, neatly planted, row after row, just like the blackest bars on the jails of hell” (40). And ends it with the one word sentence that emphasizes its previous sentence, “Locked” (40) Because the worker is repetitiously picking the plum he works in a robotic way where he feels as though he’s trapped. This leads into “Lunch” (40) which is a sentence and a paragraph alone that makes it seem like time is flying by. Instead eating during the lunch break he “lay back on the cool ground for half an hour…then up again…the trees” (40). The description of the lunch break was so short that it leads right into work and once again everything starts all over again. The workers’ laboring seems mechanical when it says “he picked a mountain of cots automatically. An automator”(40). Afterwards the sun “penetrated the tree that was hiding him and split his forehead open…he blacked out” (40). Barrio uses the sun to symbolize the truth; basically the worker should not be doing this harsh job. And the workers’ name is finally introduced to the story; his name is Manuel which symbolically stands for man or manually which ties into his job.

Then “Midafternoon” (40), once again a one word sentence/paragraph which went by fast, described in a dreamlike trance. Then the whistle blew and work is done with for Manuel so it “Ended” (40). In front of the workers stand Robert Morales. He asked them all for two cents from every bucket of cots because there was a miscalculation. But Manuel flared and said “You promise to take nothing!” (40), feeling as though if Robert takes the money, then he has no honor or pride for his hard work. Then Manuel “tipped over his own last bucket of cots” (40) twice. Manuel refusing to give his money and kicking the bucket makes him more human like and less mechanical because he’s listening to himself this time. The plum symbolizes their pride because after seeing Manuel kick the bucket they stand over theirs and tried to do it to but Robert says “I shall take nothing this time” (40). And Manuel won along with pride and honor.

Therefore Raymond Barrio suggests that humans are not meant to live life mechanically or insensibly but to experience it with honor and pride. And so Barrio concludes “For men, are built for something more important and less trifling than the mere gathering of prunes and apricots, insensibly, mechanically…men are built to experience a certain sense of honor and pride”(40).


Analysis (Formal Essay) Portrait

A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man" is about the evolution of one character as a child to a man. Stephen Dedalus is a boy who is growing up in Ireland. Through his family, Stephen was heavily influence as a young boy in the Catholic faith and Irish nationality. Therefore he went to a religious boarding school called Clongowes Wood College. He never really liked it there; he was bullied by other boys and was always lonely and homesick that made him enjoy his visits home, even though family had conflicted because of the death of the Irish political leader Charles Parnell. His first sexual experience, with a young prostitute, creates a storm of guilt and shame in Stephen, as he tries to reconcile his physical desires with the stern Catholic morality of his surroundings. The experience scarred him for life. In “A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man” by James Joyce, Joyce uses the theory of the Oedipus complex to show Stephens character evolve by unconsciously yearning for his own mother.

Stephen lives his life “mainly and normally unconscious” (Joyce 262). According to Freud, Stephen’s unconscious desire is to displace his father and take his place in the affection of his mother. Stephen “may fear that his father will castrate him, and he may wish that his mother would return to nursing him” (Joyce 263), Freud called this the Oedipus complex. In the beginning of the first chapter of the book when Stephen is in class, it was the hours for sums. This was a competition between the York and Lancaster where the York wore the red roses and the Lancaster wore the white roses. Joyce describes the roses as a symbol of being enticing, teasing and appealing because “the little silk badge with the white rose on it that was pinned on the breast of his jacket began to flutter” (25). And the White rose also stands for Stephen. Joyce chooses to place the color of the rose white for Stephen because white usually means purity. Stephen is still young and innocent. So Joyce places the red rose on the opposing team of Stephen which is the Lancaster’s. The color red on the rose is very appealing not only is it the opposite of white but the color draws much attention and have many different meaning to it. The color red can mean love, passion, seduction, or the devil. Joyce describes it as “the little silk badge with the red rose on it looked very rich” (25). Basically in this passage Stephen tries very hard to complete the sum before Lawton does until he “felt his own face red too, thinking of all the bets about who would get first place in elements, Jack Lawton of he”(25). Stephen wants to win the competition until his own face turns red which red in this case means embarrass and frustration because he’s not winning and he can’t figure out the problem. It also stands for Jack Lawton because he is Stephens’s rival. But the symbol rose and the color red symbolizes Stephen development in experience is because through this event “his white silk badge fluttered and fluttered as he worked at the next sum” (25). In a sense he is losing his innocence because he wants to win and the red rose is luring him. These symbols represent him gaining experience of being competitive. In the oedipal complex there is a competition between the Stephen and another male. In this case the rose can almost stand for his mother but Lawton is not his competitor but it is Father Arnall. During the math competition when Stephen stop competing it was Father Arnall’s voice that he hears that discourages him, “…he worked at the next sum and heard Father Arnall’s voice. Then all the eagerness passed away and he felt his face quite cool” (Joyce 25). Stephen fears of his father and any threatening males in general because unconsciously he fears of being castrated. Ironically “Father” Arnall is the father figure. Then Stephen gives up the rose and imagine about other roses of all sorts of color such as green. Stephen’s mother would be the rose that he gave up and the imaginary rose would be the girls that he thinks about to replace his mother, such as E-C. After awhile Stephen “longed to…lay his head on his mother’s lap…he longed for the play and study and prayers to be over and to be in bed” (joyce 26). But later that day Wells came over to Stephen and said “ Tell us, Dedalus, do you kiss your mother every night before you go to bed…Stephen answered I do…the other fellows stopped their game and turned round, laughing ” (Joyce 26-27). In this scene Wells is the father figure because he’s is threatening Stephen. Stephen is separated from the other boys by a sense of guilt from the competition that makes him feel threatened by them, and the source of guilt is touched when Wells ask Stephen the question. After Stephen feels miserable from being teased and he thinks of the square ditch. The ditch is significant because it symbolizes the womb. “The cold slimy of the ditch covered his whole body; and, when the bell rang for study and the lines filed out of the play rooms he felt the cold air of the corridor and staircase inside his clothes”(27). Mentally Stephen pulls himself into his own world, this in which is the womb. Stephen starts to alienate himself from other people whenever he feels that he is being threatened by a father figure. He yearns for his mother and whenever he does that is when he isolates himself from the world, it’s as though he is physically going back into his mothers womb. Yet she is his source of comfort and protection from reality. And there he contemplates whether it was right to kiss his mother and thinks of how she’d kiss him good night. Stephen put his “face up like that to say good night and then his mother put her face down. That was a kiss. His mother put her lips on his cheek; her lips were soft and they wetted his cheek; and they made a tiny little noise: kiss” (Joyce 27). Through Stephen’s evolution as a character he is faced with many male interference in this first passage he is scared by Father Arnall’s voice which causes him to stop competing. And then he is teased by Wells who brings out his insecurity of whether it was right to kiss his mother. Stephens unable to change the fact that he is scared of any male figures for he unconsciously fears of being castrated. And whenever he feels lonely from the world he search for his mother’s comfort that’s why he creates and look for women to replace his mother.

Consequently Stephen is lead into his greatest sin. As Stephen is wandering from street to street through that autumnal evening along Blackrock,

in the pause of his desire…the image of Mercedes traversed the background of his memory. He saw again the small white house and the garden of rosebushes on the road that led to the mountains and he remembered the sadly proud gesture of refusal which he was to make there, standing with her in her moonlit garden after years of estrangement and adventure (Joyce 97).

In this quote the rose represents a woman; usually a rose is associated with a woman’s beauty. When he sees any woman, rose is always brought up. The beauty of the rose or woman attracts him, like wanting a woman. Then he thinks at that moment “the soft speeches of Claude Melnotte rose to his lips and eased his unrest” (97). Stephen associates his lust and desire for a woman to Claude Melnotte, a hero of The Lady of Lyons. But the symbol rose is used in a different term where it means to gain experience. In this case he wants to complete his desire and lust for a woman and that woman would be his mother. Once again Stephen is imagining another woman to replace his mother he yearns for her touch. Therefore, after his imagination drifts off he walks into a “maze of narrow dirty street…women and girls dressed in long vivid gowns”(Joyce 98), Stephen stayed with a prostitute that night and slept with her .

Give me a kiss…his lips would not bend to kiss her. He wanted to be held firmly in her arms, to be caressed slowly, slowly, slowly. In her arms he felt that he had suddenly become strong and fearless and sure of himself. But his lips would not bend to kiss her (Joyce 99).

Stephen takes his desire for his mother to reality, he thinks of the prostitute more like his mother, that’s why he’s reluctant to kiss her. He only wants to be held in her arms because he feels fearless. Stephen is reluctant to kiss her because of the scene where Well’s teases him if he kisses his mother or not. Stephen can’t stop but surrender to his unconscious fate. Stephen pushes himself to alienate everyone else because unconsciously all he needs is his mother. He depends on other to make himself happy.

Through Stephens’s evolution as a character he faces Emma in the last chapter. They both had a conversation. Stephen says things such as “ Asked me was I writing a poem...about whom...I asked her…this confused her more and I felt sorry and mean…I made a sudden gesture…I must have looked like a fellow throwing a handful of peas up into the air” (Joyce 223) and left. He finally meets the woman that he loves but can’t talk to her. Because Stephen became so alienated from the rest of the world that he has a hard time communicating to people, he does the wrong gesture and gives people the wrong impression. Stephen has always been hiding himself. He’s always been lonely and feels a sense of insecurity. And that’s why he needs his mother so much. But the Oedipal complex is a major part of his unconscious psyche. Basically this theory shaped him.

So therefore, “A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man” by James Joyce, Joyce uses the theory of the Oedipal complex to show Stephens character evolve by unconsciously yearning for his own mother which pushes him to become an artist. Stephen’s “feeling that he is destined to become an artist is viewed to as just another myth “generated by his “neurotic need” (Joyce 271).